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This is a fun read. Is this excerpt an aside, thought by the POV character? Maybe a separate sentence and italics would help clarify...

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    The train whipped past the platform at a hundred miles an hour, blowing up skirts, sweeping up luggage and scattering passengers on the platform in its wake. The public address system blared its overly-polite warning much too late.

         “PLEASE KEEP BACK FROM THE PLATFORM EDGE. WE HAVE AN UNSCHEDULED ARRIVAL. PLEASE KEEP BACK FROM THE PLATFORM EDGE...”

         A motorbike roared out of the station house, breaking through the turnstiles and screeched to a halt on t. . .

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      The train whipped past the platform at a hundred miles an hour, blowing up skirts, sweeping up luggage and scattering passengers on the platform in its wake. The public address system blared its overly-polite warning much too late.

           “PLEASE KEEP BACK FROM THE PLATFORM EDGE. WE HAVE AN UNSCHEDULED ARRIVAL. PLEASE KEEP BACK FROM THE PLATFORM EDGE...”

           A motorbike roared out of the station house, breaking through the turnstiles and screeched to a halt on t. . .

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