Antimony Noon commented on an excerpt of The Gods That Keep Them
delete either this, or the "I know yer no’ a hill giant". 

I think as well that the confrontation between them can be stretched out a bit as it’s currently feels more monologue than conversation . This is the climactic moment of your chapter - give it the time it deserves! 

If you have Gorith respond to the first line, you can have a question prompt the rest of the explanation of who your main character is and his motivation for hunting down this giant.

Have you considered having the action interspersed with the dialogue rather than having one and then the other? 
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    I’m not sure this exposition is needed. "The Legendary Wolves of the Bay" gives a rough idea of what he’s talking about already; and you go on to explain that they’re the giant’s ancestral enemies in the next sentence.

    The point about them all being human could be brought up more naturally elsewhere? Maybe even in the following sentence about clothing, you could include a "and besides, he was a dwarf not a human", and it explains everything without stating it directly.
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      , a tribe composed only of human warriors who were incredibly skilled at killing giants.
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      This doesn’t make sense? 
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        Every night the mothers, fathers, children, and elderly alike all prayed to their ancestors and the Gods that kept them, begging for Gorith to fall down a ravine, stop breathing in his sleep, or ingest some bad mutton causing him to die from a painful bout of dysentery.
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        Every night the mothers, fathers, children, and elderly alike all prayed to their ancestors and the Gods that kept them, begging for Gorith to fall down a ravine, stop breathing in his sleep, or ingest some bad mutton causing him to die from a painful bout of dysentery.
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