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Kevin Bragg recommended Piperverse
Solid opening with a balance of exposition and action to keep the narrative moving at a facing, confusing (for the MC) pace.
Piperverse
Piper’s life finally got interesting when her mad-scientist uncle moved into her basement…then one of his experiments killed him. But what if that time machine he made actually works--can she save him? (Answer: Nope!) And THEN things get weird...
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Piper’s life finally got interesting when her mad-scientist uncle moved into her basement…then one of his experiments killed him. But what if that time machine he made actually works--can she save him? (Answer: Nope!) And THEN things get weird...
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Strong opening! Crisp, and toys with the reader’s expectations in the span of 43 words.
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