A crew of artists on a generation-defining journey to self-discovery becomes entangled in a web of doubt, deception, and a desperate desire to demystify the power of art, love and madness.
Hi Suaine! You’ve got a good start to your project page. I have some suggestions, though everyone has their own style, of course...
I followed the link to your visuals for your characters (Derek Hale!! Grumpy cuddle monster of my heart!!) and I think you should put those images on your project page! The cover you have at the link might even be better than the one you have up on Inkshares, since people connect better to faces. Faces are good to have on your book cover.
You should add any links you might have to blogs (that you want to associate with your campaign), twitter, facebook, pinterest, etc etc.
I’d mention the main characters by the names you call them throughout the book in your synopsis - do you call them Captain Pierce and Commander Pham, or Meg and Jasmine? The former sounds more distancing, and you want people to connect with them as quickly as possible.
Other than that, the only thing I tend to recommend is coming up with some comparisons to help people understand your book more easily - "If you liked ___________ and _____________, you’ll love my book!"
"A cross between ___________ and ____________, etc."
"If you loved ________________ but wanted more ___________, you’ll love my book!"
In just one short chapter, the author has given us a strong sense of the world and the characters within it. Peppering in updated expressions the reader is no doubt familiar with, blends the narrative voice with that of the characters so that the reader is drawn into the world while empathizing with the protagonist. There is also a healthy amount of mystery to keep the pages turning. I look forward to more.
In just one short chapter, the author has given us a strong sense of the world and the characters within it. Peppering in updated expressions the reader is no doubt familiar with, blends the narrative voice with that of the characters so that the reader is drawn into the world while empathizing with the protagonist. There is also a healthy amount of mystery to keep the pages turning. I look forward to more.