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I growl at him before dropping his head and kicking him in the side
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A vivid way to describe appearance. Already speaks about the character. Show not tell. Excellent!
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    Made me cringe in the best way 
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      The motorbike was a beautiful exotic red. Bold and beautiful women would hope for nothing less for their best dress. The kind they wore, not for their husbands they were eating with, but the hotshot attorney who could not keep his hungry eyes off of them, on a musky Saturday night. Sex in the air. Cherry Red It was beautiful.
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      Those Fallen Wanderer guys kinda terrify me 
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        Ouch
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          Kai Szulborski commented on an excerpt of U-Turn at Next Synapse
          You really get a sense of Johnny’s character through that. An apt description. 
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            Great Introductory lines right here! 
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              My hair has just started to turn grey, but it’s mostly brown
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