I love the way you write.  At first glance this might not seem like science fiction, but your description makes the world sound fascinating.  This isn’t simply a detective story, but such a story placed in the midst of a dystopian, post-apocalyptic future.  I think that’s a very original blending of genres, and means that your story isn’t written in the typical style of sci-fi.  I’ll be following your progress very closely!