only went up to weave the sentence before has her taking it to the seamstress shop, where it’s in the attic
actually you have it in the attic and the basement. She shows it to the Uncle first in the attic. But later all the nobles are convinced its in the basement.
The world is dark and broken after the god-king’s ambition nearly destroyed it. Jak Fuller is an orphan whose love of stories has led him to wander in search of legends. Soon it leads him to the allure of dark magic...
Chapter 3 introduces Nermel. He is a psychic goblin with a lisp. Please let me know if the lisp is hard to understand or if you can think of a better way to put his dialogue so it is understood by the reader. I went replacing s’s with th’s and f’s with ph’s when he is upset.
only went up to weave
the sentence before has her taking it to the seamstress shop, where it’s in the attic