Two ships, carrying scientists from different generations, arrive on the first habitable exoplanet. The discovery of a now-extinct, ancient race thrusts them together on a mission that, if they fail, will mean the destruction of Earth and Salacia.
By which I mean, aren’t the projects on Inkshares generally supposed to be projects that are in-progress and haven’t already been published somewhere else? Maybe this is just an incorrect assumption of mine, as I can’t seem to find anything in the FAQ or forum about it . . .
Isabelle’s life spirals into one beyond her wildest imaginings when she meets Death’s right-hand man causing worlds to collide. She’s thrust quickly into the most secretive inner-workings of Death itself, as well as an otherworldly dominion.
Hey there! Just wanted to let you know that I really like this premise, and I wanted to check and see when we might be able to expect a first peek at the writing. Hope all is going well!
So, you definitely have my attention with this story. I skipped the spoilers you posted at the beginning of Chapter 1 entirely (which I’m glad I did), and I was building up all kinds of expectations and theories right up until the end of the second chapter, when I promptly had to throw them all out the window. I was very curious, at that point, as to where you were taking this story next.
Then I went back and read the spoilers at the beginning of Chapter 1, and a lot of that curiosity died. The biggest piece of advice I can offer right now is to get rid of that spoiler section. Seriously. It’s not only unnecessary and distracting, but it very much detracts from the experience of discovering the setting and story that you’ve created. I cannot be clear enough about this: your draft, and your subsequent funding campaign, will be more successful without it.
That said, I’ve very much enjoyed your writing thus far, and I’m looking forward to your next update :)
If you like excellent writing, engaging characters, and rich and complex stories, then you absolutely need to check out this book. Oh, and it also has zombies and vampires.
The Blight changed everything, sweeping the globe, leaving humanity on the brink of extinction. The melior, with their immunity and fortified walls, stepped in to provide sanctuary. Now, the last of the human race are enslaved, but alive.
