While I like "sparked to life" very much, you use "flickered to life" about the torches in the previous paragraph. I’d pick one to keep and one to change.
I don’t think you need this. The questions before are indications of him thinking to himself and stating it detracts from the importance of those questions.
He thought to himself again as he had many times that night.
Again, this either needs a comma or a start of a new sentence after "wrong".
omething was wrong he could feel it all around him
I very much like this sentence and the history it hints at. I think it needs a comma before "yet" though.
yet did so tonight with grim determination
yet did so tonight with grim determination