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Starting strong and getting stronger, The Kingdom Calls is a compelling adventure from the beginning. With the mystery looming over the protagonist's head, the balance of knowing the motivations behind the captors versus escape makes for dynamic conflict I look forward to reading more.
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         It was a grey sky above a cracked grey desert. No living thing crossed this place. The name first given to it by man was long forgotten and the true name had never been spoken. It was simply The Desert. It was an ancient place hoarding time as desperately as thirsty men kiss water.

         The Sleeping Man walked across the dry, baked ground, counting his steps carefully. There was no landmark, no star, no wind to guide his way. There were only instructions which had been carved into. . .

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           It was a grey sky above a cracked grey desert. No living thing crossed this place. The name first given to it by man was long forgotten and the true name had never been spoken. It was simply The Desert. It was an ancient place hoarding time as desperately as thirsty men kiss water.

           The Sleeping Man walked across the dry, baked ground, counting his steps carefully. There was no landmark, no star, no wind to guide his way. There were only instructions which had been carved into. . .

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        Smith Ellis commented on an excerpt of And the Wolf Shall Dwell
        I liked this sentence for some reason. 

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          The man’s smile was broad and seemed inappropriate.
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          I think it’s just cobblestone.  ;-)
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            Sounds awkward to my ear; I’d say "John, called Yochi back home.."  Or even split the sentence up somehow.  I’m not sure if it’s technically incorrect though.   And Back should be lowercase.   Also, I have never commented or critiqued on Inkshares, so if this isn’t the type of thing you want to see/hear, then...yikes!  Sorry.  Send me a DM.  My only goal it to help others and receive help!
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