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He looked up another molecule, and nodded. Just needed a little nitrogen, but there was more than enough in the air. He sketched out a circle inside the lid of the pizza box.
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I would be careful with videogame references like this, depending on your target audience. Fair enough you may be after a demographic that will be completely comfortable with Warcraft, raids and other such terminology, but you may find you alienate a lot of older readers even despite WoW’s popularity. I’m sure you’ve considered this already but thought it was worth pointing out anyway.

Also - be careful of possessives - should read "challenge in its eyes" - no apostrophe in "its."

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    The dragon on the World of Warcraft login screen stared back at him, challenge in it’s eyes
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    Lovely metaphor.
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      It rattled reassuringly with the bones of a long dead pizza
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      Davin’s a normal student of Metaphysics and Magic... he’s just been thrown into extraordinary circumstances.
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      This is a really well-judged intro - this punchline came at just the right time. 
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        He knew a lot. What he didn’t know was that tonight he was going to die.
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        Superb.
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          Oddly, it wasn’t his first choice in how he would have liked to go, but it was on his top five.
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