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Dump is where everything ends up, waste, scrap, rubbish, and people. Lives can be made sifting through that which civilisation has thrown out, and bacon earned. Yet one man wants more, he wants to leave, and a lot of people are willing to stop him.
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great opening paragraph.  I found the use of "they" a little confusing, what it applies to.  Also, what is in competition, the scrap, or men fighting for it?  Needs just a little clarification. All good though!

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