examining fresh flowers, pictures and other offerings left near their headstones.
I’m not entirely certain how she jumped to the conclusion that Gambit was never alive. I feel like it might make more sense for her to wonder if Gambit was ever alive, rather than somehow arriving at that decision without any evidence or thought.
Lauren had a feeling the spirit creature was never alive to begin with, just like Gambit.
Two tiny hummingbird-like wings appeared to be its means of flight and its button-nosed face reminded Lauren of her favorite childhood pet, a pound puppy she had named Scruffy, who died some years back in a car accident.
Seconded. Switching speakers almost always means a new paragraph.
Lauren’s body, her skin, her dress, her glasses, everything was composed of a syrupy glowing liquid.
I’m not entirely certain how she jumped to the conclusion that Gambit was never alive. I feel like it might make more sense for her to wonder if Gambit was ever alive, rather than somehow arriving at that decision without any evidence or thought.