J. Graham-Jones commented on an excerpt of The Feather, The Flower, and The Beast
This feels like a slightly strange comparison. Does maple syrup make a sound when you pour it? Also, when he is so scared, it feels like a strange thing for Bardolf to think about.
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    heard something leaking like maple syrup being poured onto pancakes
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    J. Graham-Jones commented on an excerpt of The Feather, The Flower, and The Beast
    like their father?
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      like his father
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      It reads like there is some shifting between tenses going on here
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        that is kept short looked
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        A story about power and betrayal where a cruel creature steals love for power leaving everyone in its path feeling hollow inside.
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        I like these two :)
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          “Hoi Freshling!” said Janks over the radio. “I do still got it. And don’t you forget it!”
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          Lesson one from Janks; don’t wonder, just work.
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