Synopsis Edits: The Kairos Prophecy: New Beginnings

Created about 2 years ago by Thea Tiffany Alger and Kelly Graniel with 3 comments
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Dvwk1355 Thea Tiffany Alger and Kelly Graniel · Author · added about 2 years ago
I hope this is better:

Slick knew she was different than other humans, what with her rabbit ears and tail. However, she is to embark on a journey that will take her across the universe and back to stop an apocalypse on Earth. ’X-men’ meets ’Buffy’ meets ’Percy Jackson’.

Dsc00487   copy Craig A. Munro · Author · added about 2 years ago
I’d suggest tightening it up a bit. Maybe change the title to reflect the cover of the book (The Kairos Prophecy Book One - New Beginnings) to eliminate the need to tell us it’s part of a series. The remaining 2 sentences should be more of a pitch or an add and less of an explanation. Don’t worry about leaving something out, just give us an idea and grab our attention.
Dvwk1355 Thea Tiffany Alger and Kelly Graniel · Author · added about 2 years ago
https://www.inkshares.com/books/kairos-the-beginning

This book is going to be part of a series and is about 15 people protecting the universe from an evil being older than the universe. There’s magic, gods, prophecies, a bit of sci-fi, and good old fashion humor.