Synopsis Edits: Blood And Starlight

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Vvrmleq2 Whoa · Author · added over 2 years ago
I’m looking for both light and harsh critique of; the book title, the cover, the synopsis, the project page. 

If you have time to read the excerpts you  can ’have at them’ as well. The only thing I am not keen on reading is grammatical or typo feedback as this will be fixed when appropriate and is less important that narrative cohesiveness, characters, setting, detail etc. 

Thank you

T.P. Rafferty