Need some feedback on a short story.

Created almost 3 years ago by Whoa with 4 comments
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Me Matthew Poat · Author · edited almost 3 years ago · 1 like
You don’t know how slow I read ;) Send it over to matthew (at) pit-in.co.uk but I make no promises. Whenever I am Inkshares over the next few weeks I will be all about getting my silly little octopus story up into 3rd spot on the podium!
Vvrmleq2 Whoa · Author · added almost 3 years ago
Yes I would like feedback in the short term! But I will be sharing the finished story later anyway. If you really want to read it it won’t take long it’s a very rough early draft I will cry if you don’t @Matthew Poat 
Me Matthew Poat · Author · added almost 3 years ago
Hello Duncan,

Is there a time limit on this? I’m busy trying to win the contest but would be happy to do this for you after that ends.

Matthew
Vvrmleq2 Whoa · Author · edited almost 3 years ago · 1 like
Hello to anyone reading this! I need some feedback on a very short story. It’s only 3500 words and I just need some fresh eyes and fresh minds to read it. Please contact me by direct message and I’ll send you a link to it or post on this topic with your email address and I’ll send the link there. 

In exchange I promise to leave honest feedback on any story of your choice on inkshares. 

Thanks