Feeback and exposure (Fantasy)

Created about 2 years ago by Rory Thomassen with 15 comments
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Img 20160806 023915 Luke Fellner · Author · added about 2 years ago
Looking to help anyone on here out, DM me or just tag me in something if you need anything. Feel free to check out my book (I really wouldn’t even mind if you recommended it) but all you need to do is ask and I’ll give you any sort of feedback you may need.
12963701 1155506654460164 4588810565120449266 n Rory Thomassen · Author · added about 2 years ago
@J. Graham-Jones I appreciate it!
I like the style you are focusing on too. It is in alum with Patrick Rothfuss and The King Killer Chronicle. Names have more power than we know :P
Me J. Graham-Jones · Author · edited about 2 years ago · 1 like
Your magic system, with sounds having different powers, sounds really cool!  I’ll definitely be having a read of what’s on your page so far. Personally, I’m using a magic system based around the written word and names in particular in my book, so it’s interesting to see how other forms of communication or sensory inputs could become the basis or catalyst for magic.
Img 1672 Julia Perroni · Reader · edited about 2 years ago · 1 like
Followed and dropped you a line! Would love to know what you think of my project. Good work so far on your own book - best of luck in your campaign!
Morton benning2 Morton Benning · Author · edited about 2 years ago · 2 likes
I’m totally new to this whole concept,  but really keen to give it a go.  also really keen to share some follows and such. 
Unholy pursuit poster A. White · Author · edited about 2 years ago · 2 likes
Thank you Rory, you are so right. It’s like you are bringing forth new, imaginary life  into a reality. Although with "Clash with the Immortals," I used the old myths but I created my saga of these worlds ,myths and legends and their attributes but stayed true the ancient guidelines. Sort of like the way Seth Grahame-Smith did in Abraham Lincoln vampire hunter or Jane Austen-
Pride and Prejudice and Zombies
12963701 1155506654460164 4588810565120449266 n Rory Thomassen · Author · edited about 2 years ago · 2 likes
@Luke Fellner  I appreciate it so much! I will be going to your side of the profile and helping you out best I can too :D
Img 20160806 023915 Luke Fellner · Author · edited about 2 years ago · 1 like
@Rory Thomassen I recommended your story. I hope it reaches it’s funding goals, I wish I could get a preorder but I’m currently broke without a bank account. I just put my review in the recommendation.
12963701 1155506654460164 4588810565120449266 n Rory Thomassen · Author · edited about 2 years ago · 3 likes
@A. White  Agreed! There is nothing quite so pure as the creation of a world. Every aspect, every small detail, every new way of thinking is spectacular and fresh. 
Unholy pursuit poster A. White · Author · edited about 2 years ago · 2 likes
I’m so excited about the fantasy genre.  I love the creation of new worlds created from the imagination, giving them their own language, alphabets,  powers and even creating realms and dimensions.  There’s no limit to the power in created worlds, the only limits exist are those you create for each character. That’s what I loved about "Clash with the Immortals."  The only limit exist is what I created.
12963701 1155506654460164 4588810565120449266 n Rory Thomassen · Author · edited about 2 years ago · 1 like
@Siriano Lambert  Of course! ^_^
Wedding Siriano Lambert · Author · edited about 2 years ago · 1 like
Hey! I’m going to follow you :) are you willing to trade feedback?
12963701 1155506654460164 4588810565120449266 n Rory Thomassen · Author · edited about 2 years ago · 2 likes
@Luke Fellner  No problem.  I will do my darndest to give you that reminder ^_^
Img 20160806 023915 Luke Fellner · Author · edited about 2 years ago · 1 like
@Rory Thomassen  I’d like to read an excerpt from your book. Please remind me tomorrow, I don’t have much time right now but your book sounds very interesting, I also have a story similar about a young vengeful warrior with a magical shield that protects him and can learn spells as he blocks them. I don’t have that posted yet as one of my stories is western fiction and I’d like to publish that one first since it is such a difficult genre on inkshares to publish. I’d appreciate any feedback if you are interested. Good luck on becoming a published author!     
12963701 1155506654460164 4588810565120449266 n Rory Thomassen · Author · edited about 2 years ago · 3 likes
Hello everyone!
I would like to thank you for your time in walking into my thread. I appreciate it.
I have started a project I have long since fantasized and have only recently take the time to start up. I have written my fair share of short stories for dungeons and dragons and other table top adventures but have finally decided to take the plunge into full length fantasy novel writing.  The project is called The Warsinger Opus: The Breaking of Bells.

-What is a Warsinger?-
A Warsinger is a warrior capable of wielding mysterious weapons with intriguing origins. These weapons have the ability to bend the elements, the world, and even time. The one thing shared between them is the music they create. Each weapon has its own unique sound that is associated with its power. Each strike plays a note and every successive blow creates an orchestration. The Warsingers are the few conductors of destruction.

-The World of Tel-
My world is young, Very young. Only 1400 years have humans been aware of existing. Not only that but conventional history has only just started to be cataloged into the annals of time. It is a world blossoming. Ready to be given traditions. To be given rich stories told for centuries to come. Ready for the turning of ages.

-Those within-
The story primarily follows the apprehensive adventures of the enigma known as ’Shun.’ A foreigner to the Bellrose kingdom with origins just as mysterious as the Warsinger weapons themselves. He is a calloused, depressed, and death starved anti-hero. Forced into adventure by the inner workings of fate and a cast of colorful characters.

I would love to have some feedback and comments. I want to share a big beautiful world and would love to inspire as I have been inspired.