Nice concept! I think there’s tremendous opportunity just in this first section for even more laughs. I’d love to see more about exactly how he landed the ship, and more about how the denizens of the city reacted to him crawling out of the hole. There’s also a world of opportunity for hysterical dialog between Jopp and Chuck when the trucker first climbs into the cab and finds a slobbering drunk vagrant who speaks fluent Joppian instead of English. I  Imagine them both saying roughly the same things in different languages and neither understanding the other. This novel has a lot of great potential, and I look forward to seeing more of it as it goes along.

Nice concept! I think there’s tremendous opportunity just in this first section for even more laughs. I’d love to see more about exactly how he landed the ship, and more about how the denizens of the city reacted to him crawling out of the hole. There’s also a world of opportunity for hysterical dialog between Jopp and Chuck when the trucker first climbs into the cab and finds a slobbering drunk vagrant who speaks fluent Joppian instead of English. I  Imagine them both saying roughly the same things in different languages and neither understanding the other. This novel has a lot of great potential, and I look forward to seeing more of it as it goes along.