Reader Writer · Reader · edited over 3 years ago · 1 like

I love the author’s descriptive prose and ability to develop the characters. I’m very interested in the story and can’t wait to read more.

Rachel Kenyon · Author · edited over 3 years ago · 2 likes

Since it won’t allow me to reply to your responses, I’ll post this here where you can hopefully find it. I want to thank all of you for the enthusiasm, follows, and reviews. I appreciate it more than you can possibly know. Sharing your writing with others can be very daunting, but the reactions I am receiving are making my heart soar.

Randy Richmond · Reader · edited over 3 years ago · 1 like

I really enjoyed these first two chapters. It’s almost like you reached into the dreams that end with asking ourselves, "What the heck was that about?" and then trying and failing to go back to sleep to find out! I can’t recall what the original context was for the suggestion to ’always leave them wanting more’, but you succeeded in that!
The one thing that I wondered about was in chapter two, did you mean his hair was revolting or did you mean reverting? Curious because mine has experienced both...and worse.

Una · Reader · edited over 3 years ago · 1 like

I’m itching to read more

Robyn Mulder · Reader · edited over 3 years ago · 1 like

I want to read more! I like the characters already.

dark arts patron · Reader · edited over 3 years ago · 1 like

I’m intrigued. This sampling is plenty to make me hope that the author releases more. Good luck.