William Pomeroy · Author · added over 8 years ago

This is a very compelling selection. Are you planning to post another?

William Pomeroy · Author · added over 8 years ago

"But I at least I recognize my downfall" needs an "I" removed.

William Pomeroy · Author · added over 8 years ago

I caught a couple of typos for you.

"Bloody,crimson paradise" needs a space.