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Hello all.  I’m sorry to report that my health has taken a turn for the worse again and while I continue to work on this project it may go more slowly than I intended.  I will of course keep you up to speed on the project and do not worry, Lt Michael Domenicalli’s story will be told!  I will continue to be active here and I look forward to working with you all.
Sample Ch 5 is out today.  Very important chapter in the story arc.  Please give it a read.  Cheers everyone!

Hello everyone, just wanted to let you know that a new sample chapter should be available in the next week or so.  I’ve been slacking off the last week or so with a bout of migraines so bad I feared a Greek goddess was going to emerge but things are back on track.  Hope all are doing well and as always I hope you can read and critique what I’ve done so far so I can give you the best story possible.  Cheers.


Joni Dee · Author · added almost 8 years ago
no worries i enjoyed! come & join us at Thriller Night Syndicate -  right up your alley! 
David Howard · Author · added almost 8 years ago
Thank for the comments.  Very helpful and it’s always great to get another pair of eyes to evaluate what you’ve written.  Cheers.

David Howard · Author · added almost 8 years ago
I’ve listed this as SciFi because their is a paranormal aspect to the story.  In reality this is a detective story as you pointed out.  The plot revolves around these detectives unraveling a series of events.
Joni Dee · Author · added almost 8 years ago
David good job on the draft, I found the first chapters captivating. Not sure how this will turn SciFi but if u want to make it a dark noir crime thriller - Derek Raymond style- the ground base is all set. good luck! 
All, thank you for the support.  Chapter 3 is available in draft form on the project page.  Hope you enjoy it and I welcome any feedback or criticism as I look to move my project forward.