Thanks again for being a reader. I’ve added a bit to the story, and reworked some of the dialogue to flow a little better. We’ve moved into some action now, and we find Billy going full tilt commando in the midst of his abduction. Meanwhile, sinister forces are working behind the scenes....
Please, check it out! And give me your feedback - I’m desperate for your input on this story as it unravels.
Thank you so much for your interest. I hope I don’t let you down.
Thanks again to everyone who has shown some interest. I have a start of another chapter on the way that might replace what I currently have up as chapter two. Your interest and words really help me to keep going - I truly am grateful. Let me know your thoughts about my work in comments, DM, twitter, etc. I can’t do better if I don’t hear from you! And if you really like my work so far, spread the word. I’m a little way off from selling pre-orders (have a bit of writing to do first!), but it’s nice to get as many eyes on things as I can.
I’m having an Inkshares learning curve, so if you saw my book get wiped out, restored, wiped out and restored - I’m sorry about that! I was trying to add part of chapter two, not destroy the whole thing. Le Sigh.
The good news is that a few more word made it up. The bad news is, I don’t really think it’s a great place to start Chapter 2. I’m probably going to redo it. Not sure. Those of you who like to give feedback, please feel free to give feedback!
And thanks again for your interest and support.
Wow. I thought I’d post this early draft, and it would sit on the virtual shelf gathering virtual dust. But no, a bunch of people found it and read it. Worse, a few of you seemed to like it. Now I’ll have no choice but to continue writing it! Durn! Seriously - Thank you so much to everyone who took the time to read it, or write a review, or both.