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Nice to see readership growing, thanks for it all. Realize I've been a bit lax with chapters recently so going to upload two now for everyone. Feel free to read/review :)

Ok, I appreciate this may be disorientating for some people, but based on some professional feedback I have removed Rowan as a character, with all of the sibling rivalry now between Maddon and Ariana. It is effectively as if she has taken over Rowan's role, with a bit of editing so it suits her. Hope this doesn't stop people persevering. As a thank you for those who do, I'll be posting three new chapters