Discussion

Hi all. 

I’ve had some initial feedback that the story would read better if the characters had actual names, rather than being called things like "Spooky Owl" the owl could be called "Sid" or "Spooky Sid" and referred to as "Sid" rather than as "Owl". This would hopefully engage a older readership rather than just young children. I am going to consult with my experts (kids) and see what they think. Hopefully they’ll enjoy coming up with some suggestions and I think I’ll run a FaceBook Poll to help decide some of them. Stay tuned!

Thanks James.