Great premise, I don’t prefer first person.  Also, avoid phrases like "Beautiful spring day" describe what it means to be a beautiful spring day.  Over all its lacking description.  If you fleshed it out and tightened the prose I think it would be amazing.

Great premise!  Looking forward to reading more!

Oh, a first person point of view.  She’s a bit sassy and not meant for the snore the father makes her do. I’m very interested as how it will continue

I like the concept a lot. And that the story is being narrated by the character herself I think gives a lot of thrill to the story. Keep up the good work.

I know it's been a month since my last upload. I've been swamped with work but I promise the next one will be coming soon. Hang in there with me.

All, thank you for the support. Things have been progressing well... the next completed chapter is up. Not sure if it's going to be the next chapter there will probably be one in between.

My first two followers, this is AWESOME! Thanks guys