While I might rearrange things so that the less difficult aspects to understand preface the more complicated terms some may be unfamiliar with, the strongest aspect of this work is its value in regards to non-investors. Knowledge is power and the more one knows about the world of finance will do nothing but help long term decisions. I can't speak to the value to an investor, as I am not one, but the arguments are well structured with easy tone. The only element I would like to see more of are the sources cited throughout.

This is definitely worth checking out. It's not science fiction. It's not fantasy. It's reality. The Fairshare Model proposes a framework of investment that balances the interests of investors and employees. I pre-ordered. Let's get this one funded.