Mar 16, 2017

Hello!

Chapter 4 is in the books. Or book. This book. Everything is flowing nicely, and those of you who have reached out to give feedback seem to have only good things to say so far, so I couldn’t be happier with the way things are turning out.

I did a little reshuffling of the first chapter, moving the bit about Hilfred finding the Artefact missing to the beginning and making it a prologue as it seemed to be a better fit, but let me know what you think. As always, I encourage any feedback (anything to make the novel as good as it can be) so if you have thoughts on the story so far, don’t hesitate to leave a comment on the story page or send me a message. Don’t worry so much about pointing out technical errors (spelling mistakes and whatnot)—this is still the first draft, there’ll be plenty of opportunity to catch that kind of thing before the end.

And, once again, please share with anyone you think might be interested. You’re all fabulous.

John