Hey folks, just letting you guys know that I posted this to another website called Inkitt before I started posting it here, and it’s getting a lot of feedback on that website! If you want to head over and leave a quick comment or a full-length review over there, here’s the link! The more feedback I get on the draft, the more likely it is to be edited!

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https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/211084