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I would love to receive feedback on this story! Constructive criticism is welcomed and appreciated...of course anything about what you feel is going well, is also appreciated! I am currently working on curriculum to go with the story and a sequel that focuses on the transition the door goes through as the child grows up and leaves the house. Someday, I hope to have the book and curriculum available for schools to teach character and mindset curriculum to students in lower elementary.

Also, I am considering changing the child character to a non-gender character so that it can resonant more deeply with all children, no matter their gender. Ex: A child, a kid, it - instead of she, her and girl. Since it is from the perspective of the tree, we can assume the tree does not acknowledge the gender? Thoughts? I would love feedback you may have on this idea!

Thank you so much for taking the time to give your thoughts on my story.

Best, Lucile