Discussion

I took a detour into the middle of the book with the last two chapters, but I'm back on track with chapter 2.   I so much appreciate the recommendations, keeps me writing. 

I think this has helped me organize the book chapters a little better- 

I've added a chapter, it will go somewhere in the middle of the book.   Memoir is a difficult genre to keep the readers interest, so I would really appreciate some feedback. thank you!