I love meta. I love this piece because Lola is real, but fictional--this is meta-fiction. She may have passed on, but she speaks, literally, in the form of the super-protagonist. I love this premise, though I lament the fact that Lola is no longer with her person. I got sucked in after reading the forward...Lola now my new favorite character besides Paul and Harry Potter, master of Ball. Pers. Elbot, thank you for sharing your work. I was sad and depressed doing work-work, so I took an hour to read the first few chapters after you followed me. I am happier now. I will keep reading. I will drop thoughts as they occur.
Thank you!