Chapter 2 of Tear on Dotted Lines (rough draft) is posted. In this chapter as Dorothy is struggling to accept her own death, she discovers a clue that could help the detective get the information she needs to find her killer. Unfortunately, getting the clue to the detective will prove to be difficult without giving herself away.
I hope you all like it and I would love to read any comments or suggestions you have, especially about sentence fluidity, flow, or character and plot development. Never written anything of this style or genre before so advice is always accepted!
Thanks to everyone who follows and to those who've recommended my rough draft. I especially love reading the other book recommendations and pitches you have for me! I'm a big horror and mystery fan so keep them coming. And don't forget to stay updated by following me and my novel Tear on Dotted Lines!
Chapter 2 of Tear on Dotted Lines (rough draft) is posted. In this chapter as Dorothy is struggling to accept her own death, she discovers a clue that could help the detective get the information she needs to find her killer. Unfortunately, getting the clue to the detective will prove to be difficult without giving herself away.
I hope you all like it and I would love to read any comments or suggestions you have, especially about sentence fluidity, flow, or character and plot development. Never written anything of this style or genre before so advice is always accepted!
Thanks to everyone who follows and to those who've recommended my rough draft. I especially love reading the other book recommendations and pitches you have for me! I'm a big horror and mystery fan so keep them coming. And don't forget to stay updated by following me and my novel Tear on Dotted Lines!