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Reader Writer · Reader · added over 9 years ago
Clear and concise build up of the characters. One gets the feeling that this one is going to be fast-paced and full of action. 
Reader Writer · Reader · added over 9 years ago
Entralling two chapters. .! Makes you want to read the book NOW...! The crispy language and presentation style is refreshing. Hope will not have to wait long to meet the other protagonists! Looks like a star in the making.... Cheers
Melissa Mac Bean · Reader · added over 9 years ago
I am a very particular & fussy reader & was sent this on a recommendation of a friend. Having read the 2nd chapter, all I can say it hurry up & publish the book :) very much looking forward to reading this as I am now left wanting for more....
Melissa Mac Bean · Reader · added over 9 years ago
Intrigued by the title & reading chapter one leads me to want to know how the lead character has ended up being in the position now reflecting back on how his life has very clearly changed. A very refreshing writing style, and a story that seems to challenge social & cultural norms.... looking forward to the rest....

Thank you for you support. I have uploaded a couple of chapters. These chapters give you the background of one of the lead character. Please read it and give me your feedback. Regards, 

Jay