Stephen Carignan
The first thing I would like to do is address the innovative nature of the title, Spider Riders. Not only does such a title tell the reader immediately what they're reader is getting into, it makes them want to get into it. Fast paced and well-written, the sample chapter might not explain specifically the world the reader finds themselves in, but they understand the scene and I have a feeling the author is going to build with the reader brick by brick.