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Hi there!

My name is Shahaf Shaked (yes, I’m looking for a pen name), 31, from Israel. I honestly don’t remember what gave me the idea for Ogg in Manhattan, but I thank whatever it was every day because writing this piece has had a definite positive effect on my otherwise dull life.

Currently, only the first chapter is up for criticism. There is a second, much longer chapter (Ogg in Manhattan will be a short, two chapter novel of a little over 40,000 words) which I’ll upload upon completion. I’m almost done with the first draft, and I invite you, dear readers, to take a peek and contribute to this project. All forms of criticism are welcome.