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Userphoto2 original Reader Writer · Reader · added 8 months ago
Typo I think in chapter 3.  Where Jean just told the group that Justin was dead.  "She as younger that...  I think maybe the word "than" should be there
Profilepic Mickey Maybee Hayes · Reader · edited 8 months ago · 1 like
I read all of the chapters posted today and didn’t find any typos in them. I enjoyed the mystery so far!

I did however find a typo in the introduction (’about’ section) that you put up. you used the word ’forth’ instead of ’fourth’ for the body count that she’s found ...
Userphoto2 original Reader Writer · Reader · edited 8 months ago · 1 like
Read the first chapter, so far so good it has held my attention and usually if the first chapter does not do it for me I start looking for something else.  I will keep reading this one.