I’d love to get feedback on this including constructive criticism. I’m currently working on edits and rewrites of various sections of the story so critiques would be helpful. I’d also love to hear your reaction to the title. I’m not really sold on it but I’m struggling to come up with something else. "Deadly Nightshade VS The Fantastic Red Lightning" seems too long.
I’m excited to share this story with readers. It’s a fun and sometimes funny take on superheroes and what happens when opposites attract. I hope you enjoy this action packed story as much as I do.
Synopsis:
Imagine fighting an unbeatable opponent; generation after generation locked in a never ending struggle. For superhero Red Lightning that opponent is Nightshade the supervillain who attacks the city’s most important citizens and fights to destabilize the foundation that Coastal City was built upon.
For Nightshade that opponent is corruption, the attitudes that oppress the poor and marginalized of her society. Of course, Red Lightning isn’t on her nice list either, he always shows up just in time to hold the unjust system in place.
Imagine falling in love with the one person you hate most, and never realizing who they were.