Currently working on several chapters for this book along with The Vatheran Saga, I’m connecting the two book universes marginally--it’s not something major or anything along those lines. 

But in the future I would like to think back on how all of my books are connected in some little way. It’s a truly enjoyable process.

Take care in the meantime.

I really want to write this thing out...

Second draft chapter is up. 

So I didn’t actually mean to put this up for pre-order campaign but I clicked one too many times. So it is what it is.

Draft should be up today, just going through it again.

Well, that’s me projecting, haha. I’m taking the prisoner thing then.

I really want to know more now. Did he enter the game knowing he could die? If so, why? I want to know more about the type of person who would do that, because I most certainly would not.

Well that’s just the thing, I never said the main character is a hero.  There would be consequences yes. Namely that if you die, you die for real.  

The pitfall I worry about with that is the Dallas (dated myself) season where the whole thing turned out to be a dream. I feel like the audience was like, "Well then, who cares!?" My suggestion would be to make sure the real world stakes of pain being real, and maybe real world characters are in the AR as well, escalate the conflict after the experience turns out to be a game. My knee jerk reaction is the man turns out to be a prisoner being experimented on, and he has to then stop this from happening to others. If you send me the draft directly as a word document, I can add comments to it directly.

It would be a reveal at the very end I’ll upload the draft today it’s only a couple pages

Would you have the AR aspect be a reveal near the end or something the audience knows?