I am a long time writer, but this is my first time trying to publish a novel so any useful advise and critiques are greatly appreciated.

The idea for Janus Vita has been a long time coming. It has been influenced by movies, books, and music that I’ve consumed throughout my life. Because of this, it has been my easiest and most enjoyable project to work on.

I’m mostly looking for help with content at this time. I want to make sure it’s as entrancing for the reader as it is for me. Is there anything that doesn’t feel right or should another scene be added to clarify a situation? I’ll be happy with anything constructive that can help my story be the best it can be though.