Chapter two is up if anyone can bear it....

Hi Charlie and Brandon, I read the sample. While I like the story synopsis in the "About" section, Granny came off as too mean to be true in the first chapter. It might be too much for kids to handle. Suggest toning down the Granny and devoting more attention to Joanna. Keep up the good work!

Just to let you know you can follow Granny on twitter here - https://twitter.com/GrannyEyeball

Thanks for all the new follows!