If the rest of the chapters of this are going to follow the impression and theme set by the opening, this is going to be an absolute masterpiece of a book. The author has an incredible gift for description and the characterization is beautifully done, touching on exactly the sort of things a 12 year old protagonist would notice. Just as Jason is drawn into the world in the puddle, the reader is immediately sucked into Jason's own world. An excellent piece of writing that I look forward to following to its completion!

A well written tale of a youthful adventure.  Who can resist a Pirate tale, let alone Steampunk Pirates!!  Let's get this one to full publication to see where the adventure leads us.               

Greetings Fellow Inksharesians! Wanted to let you know I have launched a new project as part of the Geek & Sundry Fantasy Contest. It's a fun, Harry Potter-style adventure, but instead of wizards, there are STEAMPUNK PIRATES! Take a look, me hearties!

The thought of this other world helping this boy with his medical problems, just from breathing in the air, is amazing! How does that even happen? It's wonderful! I'll be excited to read more!