Story needs a bit of work, but I think it has potential. Definitely deserves a chance!

(Draft Review)There's a good writer behind the words of Forgotten, although needing a very good editor, there is a story to be found underneath the book's problems.Isabella introduces a mystery almost immediately that drew me in with the mystery of The Seven.I was able to read the story without issue--ignoring spelling and grammar mistakes--it's something that should be to turn into an amazing story if crafted with love, and an amazing editor. Good work.

This is an interesting read as the reader follows along with the protagonist who has no memory, which allows the world to unfold in front of the reader and is does in front of the character. The world itself feels complete with its own rules, and the conflict which arises from the lack of memory brings it to life even more. Forgotten is a memorable read, and I look forward to reading more.