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Uploaded Chapter Four so take a read through! Hope you enjoy it and feel free to point out glaring errors, my editing was not the most thorough I've ever done. Thanks!


-Hannah

Just uploaded chapter three with a runthrough edit, it's still not perfect but the story is there! Enjoy and let me know what you guys think!

Chapter one of Part One is up! It's about a 20 minute read so good with the morning cup of Joe. Rewrote the prologue as well and then accidentally deleted it, got confused and now it's below chapter 1...but it's there! There's probably some typos, it's only a first draft, but I did a once over to make sure there's no glaring errors. Enjoy!

So, good news! I finally finished the book I was working on and have laid that beauty to rest for the time being and I am fully focused on Deep Breath! I will be posting Chapters from the book, one a week, from now until the end of the funding period! I hope you enjoy where the story is going and I'm excited to delve into it!

Michael Melilli · Author · added over 8 years ago
Great concept!  Looking forward to seeing how this develops.

Decided to turn Deep Breath into a draft! Very beginning stages but thank you everyone for all the interest! I'm excited to start the journey!