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Profilepic Nick Nafpliotis · Author · added about 2 years ago
Love your writing (wouldn’t comment if I didn’t), but have a major issue with the sequencing in your opening chapter.

You do a great job building up this creepy otherwordly presence/threat only to reveal it was just a dream a few paragraphs in. It was honestly deflating to read. I’d maybe remove that opening section or use it at a different time. 

Otherwise, I love the concept and am enjoying the characters so far.