Aaron Castillo
This first chapter is a really exciting start to the story. The main character's motivations are very clear and relatable.  The mysterious truck following her is ominous and intriguing. Gemma's thoughts and suspicions are so creative and interesting, it makes me want to see what happens next.his first chapter is a really exciting start to the story. The main character's motivations are very clear and relatable.  The mysterious truck following her is ominous and intriguing. Gemma's thoughts and suspicions are so creative and interesting, it makes me want to see what happens next.