My intention with this story is to write something of a creepy ’romp’.

I’m leaning into classic horror tropes (think Amityville Horror/Poltergeist) and then looking at things through a slightly different lens - in this case a ghost-hunting podcast called ’Bloody Ghouls’.

What happens when siblings return to the scene of a haunting they were forced to flee as kids years before?

Is the opening interesting enough to make you want to read on? Have I got the tone and atmosphere right?

Feedback is always lovely, thank you!