Bad Italian Wine is a wonderfully written mystery that wastes no time placing the reader in the protagonist's shoes. Through several short moments, the reader can clearly see the Italian parents, smell the vineyards, and imagine the struggles they go through with building repairs. Of course the writing sample ends on a cliffhanger, making the reader want to know more.

Great start, where's the rest?  I'm already hooked.

Great start, where's the rest?  I'm already hooked.

Sofi thinks it will be interesting to restore the family wine cellar, but one problem after another leads to--murder!

This revised chapter is very, very good. Excellent. For you my heartiest Brava!