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RSR Skylark · Author · added about 9 years ago
 When I started this novel, it was intended to be nothing more than a smutty version of Alice in Wonderland. I had heard that a good way to get you foot in the door of writing was by starting with something for adult readers. As I was writing this story I grew less and less at liking the idea of it possibly being some bizarre sexual entertainment to be found in the +18 selction and wanted it to be something much better than that. It evolved a lot during its creation and changed courses 3-4 times. Now it has an indepth point, and after reviewing it twice and doing lots of editing, I have become greatly satisfied with it and even though I am ready to finish with it, I have found it quite easy to stay into during my reviewing processes.  And although is it still for mature readers, its point has greatly changed from what it was originally intended. I am sure that it will entertain its reads and give them something to think about. Of all the times I have attempted to write a story, this is the first one I have ever managed to even take further than 30 pages. 
 The original chapters are marked in days and therefore the first chapter/day is 22 pages long.  But aside from feeling the first chapter being too long to post here, there are reasons why I chose not to post the whole thing. While Day 1 helps introduce major characters and get a feel for the ’outer zone’ as I will put it, the purpose of the story does not really start to unfold until Day 2 when she enters the village. 
 Being quite a critic on my own work, but not a big harsh one, I have enjoyed this creation and hope that others will take an interest in it. I have many ideas and stories to create but I guess it is one a time. I am already 60 pages into another story with the same creative flow I felt in the first. I feel that this is the time in my life in which I am to write!