Brad McGowan

brdlm@hotmail.com

INTRODUCTION

The story is a trilogy, but runs in a different order, so the second part of the trilogy actually is the first story, and the second story, which would be the first story, explains the backdrop for the second story. Confusing lol. The third story actually concludes the story, but it would be the roughest draft. Anyways, Thank you for the opportunity to finally get this story out of my head, and I can finally say I did something with the story. My overall thoughts on the strories themselves were written with a dark but comedic tone. So enough of the prologue. Let’s get to the stories.

BOOK ONE, Which is actually the second story. My working title so far is "A Day in the Life."

The strory starts out with an alarm clock going of loudly, and the main character, Patrick Keller a.k.a. ILN (the only character I have actually given a name to) angrily shutting it off with a profane statement on how he hates alarm clocks.The setting for the story takes place during and election for city council or maybe county commissioner. The plot thickens as the lady friend he is with turns out to be the wife of his opponent in the election.There dialogue is course, but because ILN has an ability to influence the mind of others, and he turns the conversation to his own agenda. She then leaves, but Patrick Keller in a skeevy fashion arrogontly says to her, "Tell you husband I said hello and good luck."

The second scene involves what I would call the comedic relief, and it takes place on a street corner where the characters are selling pot. The conversation revolves around a discussion about how a third of the population disappears, and what will happen next. One of the characters is the straight man while the second one is the smart ass stupidly comedic one. In the end the straight man gets back to work and compells the smart ass to focus on the job at hand. Selling pot.

The next scene takes place at Patrick’s opponents house, and a conversation with his deceptively estranged wife. It is all a ruse on where she’s been and what she beens doing. The ruse is believed by her husband, and his focus is on the election taking place that day. He is a good man, and clearly the best man for the election. They depart amicably, and her husband heads to the election office.

We now move to a farm plot where the female heroine arrives on earth. Her objective is to retrieve ILN and return him to where he came from to answer for the actions that lead him to earth.

The next scene takes place in the election office of the good man who should be elected. The conversation with his aides concerns the close race with Patrick Keller and what they can do to counteract the influence he has over the election. They are unaware that ILN has the power to manipulate human minds, and in someways is fixing the election to his own accord.

Brad McGowan